The volume needs to be upped.
Good work articulating and fluent. Work on these points:Look at the camera. Even though you may be looking at your script on your desktop, your eyes can be seen looking down. Look at the camera.Your monotone seems to not be present much, but have more voice variation and liveliness.Content wise, not bad. But you could add on more statistics and make it longer.Good job and work on it!~RL
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Good work articulating and fluent. Work on these points:
Look at the camera. Even though you may be looking at your script on your desktop, your eyes can be seen looking down. Look at the camera.
Your monotone seems to not be present much, but have more voice variation and liveliness.
Content wise, not bad. But you could add on more statistics and make it longer.
Good job and work on it!
~RL
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