Jun Hui here, I like the fact that you have clear pronunciation but you also speak too fast in the video. I hope that you will slow down next time.
Regarding the information presented, I find it relevant and it is presented properly, and i can understand it clearly.
I have learnt that abortion can cause a woman much harm, whether it is physical or emotional.
However,i beg to differ with your last statement about if the family cannot support the child, go for an abortion. I feel that they could at least send it to an orphanage and not deprived the child of a chance to live, as you said, a life is a life, no matter how small.
Give reasons why abortion increases the chance of cancer.
Mr Low had given us a talk about the topic about abortion. You could include more points, such as Mother Theresa asking people who want to abort to deliver the child, and she would take care of it.
At the start of the video, you said this video would focus on the medical side of abortion, but you focused quite a lot on the emotional impact of abortion.
Work on it over the holidays (optional) and happy holidays (know you are quite happy).
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Jun Hui here,
I like the fact that you have clear pronunciation but you also speak too fast in the video. I hope that you will slow down next time.
Regarding the information presented, I find it relevant and it is presented properly, and i can understand it clearly.
I have learnt that abortion can cause a woman much harm, whether it is physical or emotional.
However,i beg to differ with your last statement about if the family cannot support the child, go for an abortion. I feel that they could at least send it to an orphanage and not deprived the child of a chance to live, as you said, a life is a life, no matter how small.
CHEERS! XD
Very good oratorical skills. But:
Give reasons why abortion increases the chance of cancer.
Mr Low had given us a talk about the topic about abortion. You could include more points, such as Mother Theresa asking people who want to abort to deliver the child, and she would take care of it.
At the start of the video, you said this video would focus on the medical side of abortion, but you focused quite a lot on the emotional impact of abortion.
Work on it over the holidays (optional) and happy holidays (know you are quite happy).
~RL
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