If possible, do not watch this.
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I learnt that being rejected by others can lead to depression and that abortion can lead to future pregnancies becoming miscarriages.RFI (room for improvement): angle of video(can only see head, sometimes not even the mouth) and pronunciation of words( a little bit unclear)
Nice job getting a green background. But you could improve on:You can talk why you feel that way about abortion.Put in more effort in the recording and there should be an improvement. Work on it and make it better.~RL
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This is mine
I learnt that being rejected by others can lead to depression and that abortion can lead to future pregnancies becoming miscarriages.
RFI (room for improvement): angle of video(can only see head, sometimes not even the mouth) and pronunciation of words( a little bit unclear)
Nice job getting a green background. But you could improve on:
You can talk why you feel that way about abortion.
Put in more effort in the recording and there should be an improvement. Work on it and make it better.
~RL
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